tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022973510486497230.post2193945237839479608..comments2009-06-28T12:59:36.734-04:00Comments on Serendipity: sweet.Sarah Kimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14195514829341732771noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022973510486497230.post-74371902592849857862009-01-22T18:00:00.000-05:002009-01-22T18:00:00.000-05:00Hi, I'm not in your class but am doing the same pr...Hi, I'm not in your class but am doing the same project so...<BR/><BR/>I like the top logos the best. Gives off a very homey feeling. I must also advise you to think about all those light pink colors. Everything's blending in together from afar.Loc Lamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01269463796137198125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022973510486497230.post-80980763275603236302009-01-22T05:25:00.000-05:002009-01-22T05:25:00.000-05:00Have you tried giving the rolling pen a more hand ...Have you tried giving the rolling pen a more hand drawn look? It might really suit the 'homemade' aspect of your company's products.Sean Stanleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09818232631664370561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022973510486497230.post-80136059021220692232009-01-22T02:54:00.000-05:002009-01-22T02:54:00.000-05:00I like the type for the "Vanessa's" at the very bo...I like the type for the "Vanessa's" at the very bottom of your blog post. I will say though that the color for the type does not stand out strongly compared with the background color. The color scheme will work out though, as you continue to push this design.<BR/><BR/>I do see the "V" under the cake. I also like the illustrative cake, it does looks scrumptious. :)Tres Swygerthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14182110672979994745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3022973510486497230.post-50153858645916496442009-01-21T23:23:00.000-05:002009-01-21T23:23:00.000-05:00This is so lovely.The only thing that I might sugg...This is so lovely.<BR/><BR/>The only thing that I might suggest is that the script V resembles a P in the smaller size.<BR/><BR/>Great work, I loved your sketches and to see how this developed.Victoria Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10419279678255532260noreply@blogger.com